Tuesday, June 1, 2010
Concering the story...AGAIN
So I have had a few questions about when I'm going to post again and to be honest I have no idea, I had the idea for this story in a dream and I'm waiting for for thoughts to come. It's hard trying to plan out out everything so the the climax is perfect.In conclusion I'll post when I can and I promise to finish the story I don't expected it to be anymore than seven chapters, this will be more like a short story than a book. My next plan after competing finding Love Again will be to work on a book with my best friend Beth who is also a fellow blogger on here.
Monday, September 21, 2009
Chapter 2
It was lunch time now right around 6th period and I was starving,a terrible choice on my part to skipped out on breakfast this but oh well I'm making up for it now aren't I,or well I would be but Lenore will not quit bugging me until I tell her about Nate.
"Damn it Lenore it was nothing I was just talking to him,"I told told her,I really wanted to be eating my pizza right now.
"Well it didn't look like nothing to me,it seemed like an argument,"she pressed on.
"We were discussing the untie in which one is to give away there Christin name,"I replied biting into my pizza.it tasted heavenly,god I love our school's lunches.
"Uh huh right,well look who shares our lunch hour with us,"Lenore mocked happily biting into her homemade sandwich,with its consistence of ham,lettuce,tomatoes and all those healthy thing.
I scanned the lunch area and saw my usual classmates,but yet again i spoke to soon.At that moment in walked the queen,Alexis Baker,her dads a huge dimplot in northern England,no one would dare mess with her since she father's is oh so powerful.Her and I have lived in the same area for more than 10 years,have a few classes together,but we don't speak often.
"Okay and the wanna-be queen is here that's not very exciting and why are you smirking at me?,"I questioned,noting her smile growing.
"Oh nothing" she replied innocently,"Just the fact that Mr.Tall,Dark,and Handsome is here too".
"WHAT,"I screed Turing my head so fast that it gave me whiplash.
I scanned the lunchroom but to no anvil did I see Nate anywhere in the small area.The lunchroom was rather quite large in my opinion it had large buttresses that arched over the ceiling walls and to the north was the lunch line where the students had there own pick of food and believe me no one ever shoved each other for food,because there was plenty to go around.The east and west walls of the room where long rectangle windows that allowed a view of the south courtyard and the south of the building was the exit which lead to the gymanision that was doubled floored.I shrugged my shoulders pretending I didn't care that I hadn't found him and turned back to my lunch chopping down on it.Lenore was dissecting my face,looking for any sparkle flash of emotion in my eyes and to her displeasure she found nothing.
"He's with Alexis she snatched him up a few moments after walked in the bloody damn room," Lenore explained to me.
"Well perhaps she is looking for a king now that Damon left her shanky arse," I retored half-heartily.
"Yes well are you coming to my house today or will I get Mr.Fitzwilliam Darcy,and is wet shirt all to myself," Lenore asked changing the subject.
Today was a Friday and Friday was also our movie night,but also gossip time and I really didn't feel like listen to who dumped whom,but this was a tradition and I didn't feel obliged to go home so soon.
"You know it,love,"I said smiling back.
At this time the lunch bell rang signaling the started the of seventh period and I trudged myself through the exit to the lockers room.I stripped myself down to my garments and opened the lock slipping my shirt and shorts on as the rest of the girls were poring in.Going through the entrance I walked down the hall a little ways and into the gym,the gym is long I would guess about 25 meters and is was about as equally wide.The gym was two stories tall the bottom section was the basketball court and had bleachers lined up against the walls,the upper section was and indoor track field.It was cut in the center with a circle and was lined with rusty bars so no was to fall out.I walked over towards by number 9 and took a seat as everyone filed inside;the teacher took attendance and began the lesson.
"All right you lazy maggots here's the deal I'm splitting you all up one half of you all will stay down here with me and play cricket while the other half goes upstairs and runs and when I blow my whistle we switch........GOT IT," He drilled us.
Did I forget to mention that here use to be a sergeant general in the military,oops.
"Yes sir,"we all mumbled.
I walked upstairs with the rest of group and started strenching while the other girls stood in one of the corners and started giggling endlessly.Curiosity got the better of me and I turned to have my heart stop in its track.......Nate was standing with the boys goofing off,shirtless,now most of the boys in my class preferred running topless;but no one had abs like Nate did they were perfectly cut,chill-zed six packs.
"Like what you see ladies,"Nate boasted,doing victory lap around the track.
"Not really,"I retored,lieing through my teeth.
"Oh really,I was sure you were one of them,googling at me,"Nate laughed along with the boys.
"Uh huh,learn to dream Nate,"I said while stretching out my legs.
"Your actually going to run,when we can just relax up here,"One of the girls questioned?
"Well,yea I need to,"I answered.
I was one of the fastest girls on my cross country team,and I was not going to lose that position any time soon,because I was to lazy to train.
"I want to race you"
"Why"
"Because your reputation is most outstanding,"Nate pressed.
"Fine but don't cry when you lose,"I laughed standing back up.
"Is that a challenge Janine," He asked,raising a perfect eyebrow.
Being as graceful as I could,I simply nodded in aw of him.
"Lets a bet shall we,the loser does one thing the winner says no matter what...agreed,"He proposed.
"Your on,"I smirked shaking his head.
What happened next blew me away and it also was the first act of suspicion that I had against Nate.
"Damn it Lenore it was nothing I was just talking to him,"I told told her,I really wanted to be eating my pizza right now.
"Well it didn't look like nothing to me,it seemed like an argument,"she pressed on.
"We were discussing the untie in which one is to give away there Christin name,"I replied biting into my pizza.it tasted heavenly,god I love our school's lunches.
"Uh huh right,well look who shares our lunch hour with us,"Lenore mocked happily biting into her homemade sandwich,with its consistence of ham,lettuce,tomatoes and all those healthy thing.
I scanned the lunch area and saw my usual classmates,but yet again i spoke to soon.At that moment in walked the queen,Alexis Baker,her dads a huge dimplot in northern England,no one would dare mess with her since she father's is oh so powerful.Her and I have lived in the same area for more than 10 years,have a few classes together,but we don't speak often.
"Okay and the wanna-be queen is here that's not very exciting and why are you smirking at me?,"I questioned,noting her smile growing.
"Oh nothing" she replied innocently,"Just the fact that Mr.Tall,Dark,and Handsome is here too".
"WHAT,"I screed Turing my head so fast that it gave me whiplash.
I scanned the lunchroom but to no anvil did I see Nate anywhere in the small area.The lunchroom was rather quite large in my opinion it had large buttresses that arched over the ceiling walls and to the north was the lunch line where the students had there own pick of food and believe me no one ever shoved each other for food,because there was plenty to go around.The east and west walls of the room where long rectangle windows that allowed a view of the south courtyard and the south of the building was the exit which lead to the gymanision that was doubled floored.I shrugged my shoulders pretending I didn't care that I hadn't found him and turned back to my lunch chopping down on it.Lenore was dissecting my face,looking for any sparkle flash of emotion in my eyes and to her displeasure she found nothing.
"He's with Alexis she snatched him up a few moments after walked in the bloody damn room," Lenore explained to me.
"Well perhaps she is looking for a king now that Damon left her shanky arse," I retored half-heartily.
"Yes well are you coming to my house today or will I get Mr.Fitzwilliam Darcy,and is wet shirt all to myself," Lenore asked changing the subject.
Today was a Friday and Friday was also our movie night,but also gossip time and I really didn't feel like listen to who dumped whom,but this was a tradition and I didn't feel obliged to go home so soon.
"You know it,love,"I said smiling back.
At this time the lunch bell rang signaling the started the of seventh period and I trudged myself through the exit to the lockers room.I stripped myself down to my garments and opened the lock slipping my shirt and shorts on as the rest of the girls were poring in.Going through the entrance I walked down the hall a little ways and into the gym,the gym is long I would guess about 25 meters and is was about as equally wide.The gym was two stories tall the bottom section was the basketball court and had bleachers lined up against the walls,the upper section was and indoor track field.It was cut in the center with a circle and was lined with rusty bars so no was to fall out.I walked over towards by number 9 and took a seat as everyone filed inside;the teacher took attendance and began the lesson.
"All right you lazy maggots here's the deal I'm splitting you all up one half of you all will stay down here with me and play cricket while the other half goes upstairs and runs and when I blow my whistle we switch........GOT IT," He drilled us.
Did I forget to mention that here use to be a sergeant general in the military,oops.
"Yes sir,"we all mumbled.
I walked upstairs with the rest of group and started strenching while the other girls stood in one of the corners and started giggling endlessly.Curiosity got the better of me and I turned to have my heart stop in its track.......Nate was standing with the boys goofing off,shirtless,now most of the boys in my class preferred running topless;but no one had abs like Nate did they were perfectly cut,chill-zed six packs.
"Like what you see ladies,"Nate boasted,doing victory lap around the track.
"Not really,"I retored,lieing through my teeth.
"Oh really,I was sure you were one of them,googling at me,"Nate laughed along with the boys.
"Uh huh,learn to dream Nate,"I said while stretching out my legs.
"Your actually going to run,when we can just relax up here,"One of the girls questioned?
"Well,yea I need to,"I answered.
I was one of the fastest girls on my cross country team,and I was not going to lose that position any time soon,because I was to lazy to train.
"I want to race you"
"Why"
"Because your reputation is most outstanding,"Nate pressed.
"Fine but don't cry when you lose,"I laughed standing back up.
"Is that a challenge Janine," He asked,raising a perfect eyebrow.
Being as graceful as I could,I simply nodded in aw of him.
"Lets a bet shall we,the loser does one thing the winner says no matter what...agreed,"He proposed.
"Your on,"I smirked shaking his head.
What happened next blew me away and it also was the first act of suspicion that I had against Nate.
Friday, June 19, 2009
Chapter 1
It's about mid November and everyone in the student parking lot was riled and curious,today we were suppose to be getting a new student and he was all the way from Scotland.Sue had told me that his name was suppose to be Nate Heartlink,she had even posted a picture of him on the student broad and I had to admit that he was pretty good eye candy.He was tall I'm guessing about maybe 6 feet,had the deepest bluest eyes I had ever seen,and had deep chocolate brown hair.You could just tell that he had an athletic built body,I wonder what sports he will be joining,because at this high school sports are everything.If your not in a sport you might as well be consider a loser around here,now I'm not very stereo typical but yes I'm in a sport,Cross Country to be specific.
"Janine,come on we are going to be late for class,if I get one more dentition from Mrs.Kus my mother is going to ground me for who knows how long,"my best friend Lenore was complaining.
"Alright quite your whining I'm coming Lenore" I proceeded to her after closing my locker.
I followed Lenore up the stairwell to Mrs.Kus's English room, English was one of my best subjects I simply loved to read.Currently we were working on Macbeth and it was interesting how it tied up so nicely with predicting the outcome to the Civil War,and yes I do love history but I'm not as passionate about it as English.We quickly slid into the classroom and Mrs.Kus didn't acknowledged our entrance she was speaking with one of her softball players Amanda,she was their pitcher.I looked up on the broad and there were study guide questions to Act 3 of Macbeth,the class hour was strict boring till about 20 minutes before the class period ended,in walked a boy who stood around 6 foot tall and he walked into the center of the room.
"Hello,I'm sorry to late there was a problem with my schedule so I had to stay back while they fixed it,"the boy spoke so smoothly.
Mrs.Kus looked up and smiled at him,"Oh yes they did tell me you would be here a little late....Since your here please introduce"
"Of course,my name is Nate Heartlink and I will be joining you all this year".
At that moment the bell rung and everyone jostled out of their chairs to second period.I stayed behind and organized my belongs before I departured to United States,Mrs.Kus was informing the gentleman about the running of her class and what we were doing at the present moment,he seemed to understand everything.His backside was faced towards towards me and was dressed in such a posh manner;he was in a pair of black jeans that were baggy but not to baggy to see his boxers or briefs.....I really hope there boxers anyways he had of a leather jacket and it fit his body very well.You just see his broad shoulders stretching out of them and the his arms were doing the same,he was going to give all the girls a run for their money this year.epesically since the Christmas Ball was less than a month away.
"Is there a reason as too why you are still here Miss Bleu,or do you have a question on the assignment perhaps,"Mrs.Kus asked dragging me from the dreamland.
"Not at all" I replied,"I was lingering around to see if Mr.Heartlink needed help in finding his next class room".
Mrs.Kus nodded and left the class room,leaving us alone until the the next class came in here,with Mr.Pope he happened to teacher Algebra to the incoming freshman of the year,I feel sorry for his poor soul.
"So will you be needing my guidance this morning or do you already know your way around this school"I asked ?
"Not really but I will spare you the humility of being rejected and accept your offer" He was quieted for a few moments ,"You already know my name so I get the pleasure of knowing yours?".
"I'm not sure you deserve that honor yet Mr.Heartlink," I challenged him,walking out of the room to the stairwell.
"Please call me Nate were not strangers but acquaintances plus it is common curtsy to give me your name since I have given mine to you,"He countered,following me.
"But then again you weren't giving it to me but to everyone in the room,Nate,"I conjured.
At that moment Lenore bounced down the stair calling my christin name,I turned and looked at Nate he was smirking knowing he had won the battle my default of my friend.
"I'll see you around then Nate I have a History class waiting on me ..... lets go Lenore",I said dragging her back down the stairwell but not quickly enough.
"You to Miss Janine,"He smirked turning beyond the wall so I couldn't catch his expression and with that said the bell rang and second period had begun.
"Janine,come on we are going to be late for class,if I get one more dentition from Mrs.Kus my mother is going to ground me for who knows how long,"my best friend Lenore was complaining.
"Alright quite your whining I'm coming Lenore" I proceeded to her after closing my locker.
I followed Lenore up the stairwell to Mrs.Kus's English room, English was one of my best subjects I simply loved to read.Currently we were working on Macbeth and it was interesting how it tied up so nicely with predicting the outcome to the Civil War,and yes I do love history but I'm not as passionate about it as English.We quickly slid into the classroom and Mrs.Kus didn't acknowledged our entrance she was speaking with one of her softball players Amanda,she was their pitcher.I looked up on the broad and there were study guide questions to Act 3 of Macbeth,the class hour was strict boring till about 20 minutes before the class period ended,in walked a boy who stood around 6 foot tall and he walked into the center of the room.
"Hello,I'm sorry to late there was a problem with my schedule so I had to stay back while they fixed it,"the boy spoke so smoothly.
Mrs.Kus looked up and smiled at him,"Oh yes they did tell me you would be here a little late....Since your here please introduce"
"Of course,my name is Nate Heartlink and I will be joining you all this year".
At that moment the bell rung and everyone jostled out of their chairs to second period.I stayed behind and organized my belongs before I departured to United States,Mrs.Kus was informing the gentleman about the running of her class and what we were doing at the present moment,he seemed to understand everything.His backside was faced towards towards me and was dressed in such a posh manner;he was in a pair of black jeans that were baggy but not to baggy to see his boxers or briefs.....I really hope there boxers anyways he had of a leather jacket and it fit his body very well.You just see his broad shoulders stretching out of them and the his arms were doing the same,he was going to give all the girls a run for their money this year.epesically since the Christmas Ball was less than a month away.
"Is there a reason as too why you are still here Miss Bleu,or do you have a question on the assignment perhaps,"Mrs.Kus asked dragging me from the dreamland.
"Not at all" I replied,"I was lingering around to see if Mr.Heartlink needed help in finding his next class room".
Mrs.Kus nodded and left the class room,leaving us alone until the the next class came in here,with Mr.Pope he happened to teacher Algebra to the incoming freshman of the year,I feel sorry for his poor soul.
"So will you be needing my guidance this morning or do you already know your way around this school"I asked ?
"Not really but I will spare you the humility of being rejected and accept your offer" He was quieted for a few moments ,"You already know my name so I get the pleasure of knowing yours?".
"I'm not sure you deserve that honor yet Mr.Heartlink," I challenged him,walking out of the room to the stairwell.
"Please call me Nate were not strangers but acquaintances plus it is common curtsy to give me your name since I have given mine to you,"He countered,following me.
"But then again you weren't giving it to me but to everyone in the room,Nate,"I conjured.
At that moment Lenore bounced down the stair calling my christin name,I turned and looked at Nate he was smirking knowing he had won the battle my default of my friend.
"I'll see you around then Nate I have a History class waiting on me ..... lets go Lenore",I said dragging her back down the stairwell but not quickly enough.
"You to Miss Janine,"He smirked turning beyond the wall so I couldn't catch his expression and with that said the bell rang and second period had begun.
Wednesday, June 3, 2009
concering the story
I have decided to rearanged my story yes it will still about vampires but I have been inspired by the movie Lost in Austen and Pride and Prejuice.
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